Skip the full Pro suite. Keep the part that actually protects your voice.
You passed on multi-character fingerprints and three rewrite intensities. Fair. This page keeps the core differentiator: Voice Rule Card extraction — so one controlled rewrite still sounds like you wrote it.
Here’s what you almost walked away from
A cleaner passage can still flatten how your story is supposed to sound. Voice drifts. The emotional arc softens. The rewrite gets “better” — and somehow less yours.
The front-end cleans the passage. Voice Rules teach the system how your story is supposed to sound.
Not multi-speaker dialogue tests. Not Light / Standard / Deep mode menus. Not side-by-side conservative-vs-stronger bake-offs. Just the reusable Voice Rule Card — plus voice-drift analysis, scene emotional-arc reading, and one controlled standard rewrite path with line-level explanations and boundary preservation.
What stays in this $26.95 downsell
One desire: a controlled rewrite that still sounds like you — without the advanced Pro suite.
- Voice Rule Card extraction — the reusable rules your prose already follows. The main differentiator.
- Voice-drift analysis — catch where the rewrite starts sounding unlike you.
- Scene emotional-arc analysis — the beat’s rise and fall, not isolated lines.
- One controlled standard rewrite path — no Light / Standard / Deep mode picker.
- Line-level explanations — see why a change was suggested, then decide.
- Boundary preservation — protect POV, intent, and hard limits.
Removed from this offer (available only in full Pro): multi-character dialogue fingerprints, speaker-comparison tests, three rewrite intensities, and dual conservative/stronger rewrite comparison.
Clean is step one. Voice Rules are step two.
You don’t need every advanced Pro responsibility. You need the system that keeps your sound intact.
Without Voice Rules
Passage cleaned. Voice drifts. You second-guess whether the rewrite still sounds like your book.
With this downsell
Voice Rule Card, drift + arc analysis, and one standard rewrite path that defends your intended sound.
Voice Rule Card extraction. Drift + arc analysis. One controlled standard rewrite. Your intended voice preserved.
- Voice Rule Card extraction (core differentiator)
- Voice-drift + scene emotional-arc analysis
- One controlled standard rewrite path
- Line-level explanations + boundary preservation
One payment. No subscription. Instant access. (Full Pro was $37.)
Add Voice Rules to my order — $26.95You don’t need every Pro feature.
Get the Voice Rule Card that keeps the rewrite sounding like your book.
Extract the rules. Spot the drift. Run one controlled standard rewrite — with explanations and boundaries intact.
Yes — add Voice Rules for $26.95
P.S. Cleaning a passage fixes the mess. Teaching the system your voice fixes the manuscript. No multi-character suite. No three-mode rewrite picker. Just the reusable Voice Rule system — $26.95, one time, on this page.